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tsukinofaeriiFor the past two days, I have had data entry, which I finally just finished. *rawr* Luckily, everything else is slightly less rawr. I woke up to only mild bitching from my girl bits, and in a few days should even stop hemorrhaging from them. My car is running. Papa proceeds well. The coffee pot has been replaced by one from The Other House. (It is a long, long story, but basically we have a whole second house on the property that no one lives in for various reasons. It's kind of creepy, and reminds me of Roanoke a bit. There's still a glass on the coffee table, but whatever was in it is long gone.) Pepper/Natasha is slightly less blocked. I have achieved two squares on H/C Bingo, and will attempt a third today.
Beta? Anyone? They are short. (dangles) Pica!Tony and a bit of Natasha/Pepper that won't fit in the story.
All in all, I am notably in a better mood. :D I haven't growled at anyone today! The only downer right now is that my aunt has asked me to put my credit on the line to purchase a riding lawn mower. Just so this is in context, we currently have at least 5. All of them are broken ("but they'll be fixed one day!"), because they're badly misused. One of them lasted only three months in winter. And I'm supposed to purchase a sixth and trust that she'll handle the payments, when her husband keeps screwing everyone else's credit over by ignoring his own bills. (And of course, if I say "no", I'm an ungrateful bitch who doesn't remember/care how much trouble she went through when I was a kid to make sure I could visit. Can't forget that—the only reason to be nice to people is so they'll owe you. Family Unfriendly Aesop!) I have an appointment to meet her in a half-hour. Hopefully, this will fail miserably.
In the writing meta (still untitled), I have two written up roughs, and am considering jumping to headers & betaing. Betaing is a current topic, since Cap_Iron had a post on concrit recently, and... Well, what is a beta except really good, deliberate, begged for concrit pre-posting? On top of that, it's important now, since people are hardly going to wait months for me to bestow my questionable wisdom before writing/posting. Whereas setting/characterization/etc are the sort of thing you have to think about while you do it. It just feels a bit backwards, since that's post-writing work and I'm starting at the beginning on everything else. Grah!
As a contrast to Cap_Iron's ancient November 2009 post on beta reading, I was thinking of offering up one of my own shorts as an example. Five hundred words, ruthlessly posted on LJ in all their unpolished glory, with the beta notes included (with permission from the beta, of course). Beta reading is hard, and everyone's different in how they handle it and what they expect. So I figure, the academic approach is good, but sometimes an example is good too, you know?
Also, will someone please stop me from signing up for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
werewolfbigbang. Please? It's four months to write 10k, which is easy-peasy if it would just stay 10k. But Pepper!femslash is going to be 20k (I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE 10k!!!), Amensia!Tony2 is going to be 20-30k probably, then Vamp!Tony2 will be another Huge Fic Of Pain and Angst and I can't forget girl!Steve2...
(flail)
SOMEONE SAVE ME FROM VALTYR!
Beta? Anyone? They are short. (dangles) Pica!Tony and a bit of Natasha/Pepper that won't fit in the story.
All in all, I am notably in a better mood. :D I haven't growled at anyone today! The only downer right now is that my aunt has asked me to put my credit on the line to purchase a riding lawn mower. Just so this is in context, we currently have at least 5. All of them are broken ("but they'll be fixed one day!"), because they're badly misused. One of them lasted only three months in winter. And I'm supposed to purchase a sixth and trust that she'll handle the payments, when her husband keeps screwing everyone else's credit over by ignoring his own bills. (And of course, if I say "no", I'm an ungrateful bitch who doesn't remember/care how much trouble she went through when I was a kid to make sure I could visit. Can't forget that—the only reason to be nice to people is so they'll owe you. Family Unfriendly Aesop!) I have an appointment to meet her in a half-hour. Hopefully, this will fail miserably.
In the writing meta (still untitled), I have two written up roughs, and am considering jumping to headers & betaing. Betaing is a current topic, since Cap_Iron had a post on concrit recently, and... Well, what is a beta except really good, deliberate, begged for concrit pre-posting? On top of that, it's important now, since people are hardly going to wait months for me to bestow my questionable wisdom before writing/posting. Whereas setting/characterization/etc are the sort of thing you have to think about while you do it. It just feels a bit backwards, since that's post-writing work and I'm starting at the beginning on everything else. Grah!
As a contrast to Cap_Iron's ancient November 2009 post on beta reading, I was thinking of offering up one of my own shorts as an example. Five hundred words, ruthlessly posted on LJ in all their unpolished glory, with the beta notes included (with permission from the beta, of course). Beta reading is hard, and everyone's different in how they handle it and what they expect. So I figure, the academic approach is good, but sometimes an example is good too, you know?
Also, will someone please stop me from signing up for
werewolfbigbang. Please? It's four months to write 10k, which is easy-peasy if it would just stay 10k. But Pepper!femslash is going to be 20k (I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE 10k!!!), Amensia!Tony2 is going to be 20-30k probably, then Vamp!Tony2 will be another Huge Fic Of Pain and Angst and I can't forget girl!Steve2...(flail)
SOMEONE SAVE ME FROM VALTYR!
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Date: 2010-06-11 10:46 pm (UTC)Nick was the only one to survive, except that he escaped, and then they went on to create Steve. It sort of implies that Steve and Nick got the same serum, though I suppose there could be a difference. The inevitable alpha battle between Nick and Steve might be worth dealing with werewolf!Fury. Or, actually, if the Werewolf Virus is only at part-strength, making sure Cap has the effects without the fur, I could keep the Battle of the Viruses. Cap's immune system and Vampire take each other out, giving the weakened Werewolf a chance to finish changing him. Werewolves would have to be very very very rare, though, or I could never manage to get away with not having any sign of fur in the first one. Or maybe it's a politics thing. There will be much political stuff going on.:D Happy to help!
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Date: 2010-06-13 12:19 am (UTC)Nick was subject 41, and Steve is subject 55--awful lot of failure in between, no? Experimentation doesn't just keep trying the same thing over and over, they had to have altered it, particularly with such a wide gap between subjects. Though, I went back and looked at the dates listed in UO1 and UO2, and Fury gets arrested and experimented on late to mid 1943, and Steve trots across Times Square in 1942...which if the US has entered the war is either early or late 1942, since it's snowing. So, um, there is already weirdness going on! And looking at Ultimate Origins 2, it seems like Steve undergoes a lot of prep and surgery before he gets injected, as well. I say that this leaves the door wide open for a touch more werewolf to be in Steve's formula. :DAm looking at it now!
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Date: 2010-06-13 03:10 am (UTC)I think it's safe to say that Origins just Didn't Do The Research on a lot of things. Even within themselves. Fury would have had to be tested on after America entered the war, though, considering his back story, and Steve was posited to have been changed at the very beginning I think. Maybe with Fury, they were trying to have a serum that didn't have any of the Werewolf in it at all. Synthetic or something. I am very much leaning towards this as its own story. IDK, we shall see how the fics call. No New Stories until the old ones are done