The problem with swearing in fiction is that it creates a pause-shock moment that can be really useful if it's not overused. I'm worried about over use. I don't want to diminish the strength of that last line because Jan is frustrated. But I was on Kamikaze in Write or Die, and "fuck" is my default vocabulary word. *g*
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Date: 2010-11-22 06:45 pm (UTC)Climax arriving! Finally!