Nano: The Day Hank Pym Died...
Nov. 10th, 2010 11:29 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
tsukinofaeriiI'm thinking, a tragic shovel accident.
Hank is just... (twitch) I had plans for him, and I have abandoned them. He's just too much of a hassle. Every scene that has him in it turns into an argument, which is not bad, except that there are other things that need to be focused on. Even more annoying, he's in the dark about the whole vampire thing, and no one is willing to explain for obvious reasons. :\ Ult Hank just blows. I give up.
So I will be removing him after all of this is done, and letting Jan handle the SCIENCE in everything I write from here on out. And suddenly, it's all much, much easier. I will write Jan in a gratuitous lab coat to make up for it. (nodnod)
Tomorrow is Veteran's Day in the USA, so I am off work. Sleep! \o/ And I will be using it to write as well. An excellent thing all the way around (except for lost money). I've been catching up with Earth's Mightiest Heroes, and I'm kind of in love with them all. When Thor admitted to following Jane, he was stroking his hammer. Come on, that's a gimme. And I still love A:EMH Hank. :( So very much. Also! Jan's stingers have some kick! :D "We're superheroes!"
Love love love love.
Okay, I am sleepy and rambling. I passed two points, and am now a week ahead of myself. :DToday I got to 31,118 words, so I wrote 4,041 words. Many of which will end up revised to hell because they included Hank. :| Also, Steve has colluded withvaltyr (though Valtyr could not have seen it coming) to destroy an entire subplot, resulting in chaos and nekkidness. Why is it always Steve that trips me up?
Hank is just... (twitch) I had plans for him, and I have abandoned them. He's just too much of a hassle. Every scene that has him in it turns into an argument, which is not bad, except that there are other things that need to be focused on. Even more annoying, he's in the dark about the whole vampire thing, and no one is willing to explain for obvious reasons. :\ Ult Hank just blows. I give up.
So I will be removing him after all of this is done, and letting Jan handle the SCIENCE in everything I write from here on out. And suddenly, it's all much, much easier. I will write Jan in a gratuitous lab coat to make up for it. (nodnod)
Tomorrow is Veteran's Day in the USA, so I am off work. Sleep! \o/ And I will be using it to write as well. An excellent thing all the way around (except for lost money). I've been catching up with Earth's Mightiest Heroes, and I'm kind of in love with them all. When Thor admitted to following Jane, he was stroking his hammer. Come on, that's a gimme. And I still love A:EMH Hank. :( So very much. Also! Jan's stingers have some kick! :D "We're superheroes!"
Love love love love.
Okay, I am sleepy and rambling. I passed two points, and am now a week ahead of myself. :DToday I got to 31,118 words, so I wrote 4,041 words. Many of which will end up revised to hell because they included Hank. :| Also, Steve has colluded with
valtyr (though Valtyr could not have seen it coming) to destroy an entire subplot, resulting in chaos and nekkidness. Why is it always Steve that trips me up?"Do you remember Project Rebirth, Steve?" Tony kept his hands up as he stepped in closer. "Do you remember signing up for the Army?"
Recognition lit Steve's face like a lamp coming on. Slowly, he rose up from his crouch. "Ye—yeah. Doc Erskine. You—you his assistant?"
Oh God, you owe me for this one. "I'm Dr. Stark," Tony said, doing his best to turn his grimace into a smile. Pepper made a choking noise, but Steve didn't appear to notice. "You're having a reaction to the treatments. I'm here to help you, but you have to let Nurse Potts go."
"No, thank you, Miss Maximoff. Hey, would you like a job as my personal assistant? I seem to be short one." He gave her the award-winning Tony Stark smile that she remembered from her days on the team.
Except that something was slightly off. Wanda leaned in close.
In response, Tony leaned back. "Whoa—hey, I don't know if you noticed, but I'm kind of taken—"
"Hush." She grabbed his jaw. The prickle of his beard tickled her palm as she held his head still, prying back his lips. Sharp, gleaming teeth shined behind them, whiter than white and edged like razors. If she hadn't been close, she never would have noticed. All of a sudden, several oddities around the mansion made sense. "Hm. I assume that's not cosmetic dentistry?"
