Nice! I really liked it~ especially becasue i know the song that you used in the first part ~_^. Anyway I liked how you kept the characters all in charater in a relitic setting! Unfortiounatly our society treats gay guys like Sora's dad does and you did an amazing job in depicting that in you story. I love how supportive Riku is during throughout Sora's trouble, He's a little sweetie~! I also really liked how you depicted Sora and his dad's reunion. Instead of hateing him compleatly, Sora chose the more realistic feeling where he wishes for his father's aproval, but still doesn't get it. That he still loves his father but it is a love tainted by betrayal. Very sad story but in real life not everything is flowers and sparkles, and you did an excelent job~