It's 4:42am, but I can't stop reading. It'ssoenthrallingomg. XD
YAY plot! YAY Selphie, even though I kinda saw it coming but just in a different way. XD I thought she was gonna turn into a bad guy, but I like this much better. EEEE, I love how you write her.
She fixed her ears. This... might be one of my favorite lines. I'm not sure why it stuck out so much. Just the entire weight of the situation--he's dying, she's suddenly a stranger, everything's blearing into confusion, and that's what he thinks about. It just sounds so sad, because that's what they were joking about moments before. GUH.
This also wins: Selphie's driving?! Eternity wasn't as certain as it had a moment before. LMAO.
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It's 4:42am, but I can't stop reading. It'ssoenthrallingomg. XD
YAY plot! YAY Selphie, even though I kinda saw it coming but just in a different way. XD I thought she was gonna turn into a bad guy, but I like this much better. EEEE, I love how you write her.
She fixed her ears. This... might be one of my favorite lines. I'm not sure why it stuck out so much. Just the entire weight of the situation--he's dying, she's suddenly a stranger, everything's blearing into confusion, and that's what he thinks about. It just sounds so sad, because that's what they were joking about moments before. GUH.
This also wins: Selphie's driving?! Eternity wasn't as certain as it had a moment before. LMAO.
One chapter left... Off I go.